# Pass 1 — self review 2

## What changed successfully

- The app now belongs to the same visual world as the reference: pearl light, translucent glass, coral accents, floating ornament, and a native frosted tab bar.
- Track finally has one job. All six logging actions and the dry action fit in the first viewport.
- History is now legible product architecture rather than a utility sheet. The recent seven days are immediate, the five-week calendar exposes 35 editable dates, and the full list begins below it in 30-day pages.
- Fate is now the theatrical share surface. The dark warning-card metaphor and the large `PROVISIONAL` language are gone.
- Risk has a strong visual hierarchy: personal number, curve, one plain-language interpretation, then optional depth.

## Problems visible in the simulator

1. The drink artwork has pale rectangular backgrounds. This breaks the floating-object illusion on Track and is especially obvious on Fate. Pass 2 must integrate or remove those backgrounds.
2. The background is intentionally exuberant, but the large lower-left crystal competes with History's first list row and Track's dry action. Lowering its opacity or allowing the glass cards to cover it more strongly would improve depth.
3. The disabled dry action is too faint. Disabled must still be readable.
4. Fate's drink strip is visually useful, but the five tiny rectangular images look like unprocessed thumbnails. Fixing the artwork integration should make this the strongest screen.
5. The Risk chart's far-right x-axis label clips at the card edge. Give the plot more trailing room or omit that terminal label.
6. History is dense by design. The five-week calendar is useful, but the page needs a little more separation before “The whole story.”

## Pass 2 decisions

- Blend the drink cutouts into their containers and remove visible crop edges.
- Strengthen the dry-action contrast.
- Fix the chart edge label.
- Preserve the four-tab structure and current information hierarchy.

Review run: iPhone 17 Pro simulator, populated deterministic review history, all four tabs inspected at full resolution.